Gggrrrrrr! ! Comments

Enticing title, great shape - your poem captures those blocked-out-sun feelings perfectly. S :)

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A interesting poem.... Slimm

The skies can evoke so much feeling in people...the grey of sadder days...the clouds that form the shapes of our imagination...the colours of summer blue....bring song to all hearts...a brilliant piece again Fay....well expressed 10+++

bemoan bemoan the clouds! Why the shroud! Wasn't the sun just shining? .... beautiful.... :)

P.S...Wheres the Tiger? ...............................Did i misplace him................. ....................... betweeen the linage....................... ...................................of your................................ ..............................poem? or is this an A N G R Y...F A Y...FROM THE U.K.? ! fJr

Either these clouds want centerstage, or a Coppertone tan! lol! Fay....as always, you and your unique poetic architecture looks so good & moves so well....so fluxive! Solid Work, my dear! F j R

When all above, is painted blue, a white fluffy cloud, bids me adieu for in its form, i clearly see, the passing! to eternity a face, a dog, a teddy bear, i see faces everywhere one last look before they depart, this truly is, a work of art

Naughty clouds that bring the rain, gggrrrrr indeed lol, 10 Lynda xx

loved this Fay, , , , Maggie

Clouds too want to warm their faces After roaming around in so many strange places The sun can thus rainbows bring And rainbows are such a lovely thing!

LOL, sounds like the type of day we are having, one second looks like rain, next second looks gorgeous, rain, gorgeous, rain...almost gorgeous..lol 10