Thursday, May 30, 2013

Gfr Comments

Rating: 3.5

when we first met
you were sixteen and I was fifteen
And at that given time
I had no idea you would mean so much to me
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Crystal Castro
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Khairul Ahsan 07 August 2013

Adolescent love, the memory and craving lingers on for life! So pure, so innocent. I understand your emotions. What is GFR by the way? This poem is an expression of pure love. The two souls being miles apart physically, crave for each other. Very touchy, well written.

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Crystal Castro

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