Your daughter has created a barrier out of cushions from the couch
In the middle of your living room
Which she and her sleepover friend proceed
To jump over, entreating you to 'judge' the quality of each jump.
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i just realized two things i didn't mention in first comment: 1- is Georgia the mom or daughter mentioned or the state? ? 2- why does the poem start about a relationship with a woman and ..............................OK, i see. you were thinking one thing which reminded you of another. bri :)
Georgia is the mom in this poem Bri and yes I suspect that we all have performance issues. Ha!
hey, bro, surprise! this long one is going to be 'in' my/our July 2017 showcase, but you will have to go to the showcase to see how readers may access your poem, AND how YOU can access poems from the showcase as well! ! ! DO YOU EVER DO THAT? ! complaints? talk to 'the management': ME! hee-hee. bri ;) thanks for this fine poem.