Saturday, July 23, 2016

Getup Old Flower Comments

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Getup old flower, having seen your apex,
I love the manner you enjoyed a climax,
The way you invited the cute butterflies,
The way you excited the sweet honey flies,
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Geetha Jayakumar 02 August 2016

You have painted the wonderful picture of nature with artistic words. Wonderful write. Loved reading it.

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Savita Tyagi 27 July 2016

So beautiful. All the love and pleasure and beauty that a flower brings is taken away one day yet its presence is felt eternally. Than you so much. It is such a pleasure to read your poetry.

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Loke Kok Yee 24 July 2016

The flower took on a new life In lines flowing free and nice thank you sir

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M Asim Nehal 23 July 2016

Inspiring and motivating poem nicely written and as Kelly said it applies to both

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Kelly Kurt 23 July 2016

The description fits both the flower and a human life

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Khalida Bano Ali 23 July 2016

A lovely description of a flower; s life and death.

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