Tuesday, July 17, 2012

Getting Thirsty Comments

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Right now, I am just sitting here
Feeling uninspired, wondering why
Instinctually reaching my hand into a bag of chips
Salivating, eating one right after another
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Marcus McKinley
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Adeline Foster 06 February 2013

Would you believe, I am a Grammar Professor and I still had to look up the word ‘Instinctually’ and, low and behold, it is a word and it is spelled correctly. Cute poem. Read mine - A Writers Dilemma – Adeline

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Poetheart Morgan 18 August 2012

Sensitivity, close connection with the words. Until a bag of chips turns poem. Lindo.

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Bernard Snyder 17 August 2012

'You forgot your glass of water! Nice write, Marcus! Your creative juices were flowing with this one.

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