Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Getting Past The Pain Comments

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if you can understand,
you can see,

all of this hurt and pain,
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mona martinez
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if you can understand, you can see, all of this hurt and pain, i'm just sick of, .........it is unbearable and only can be shed with tears.... beautiful pain language... i like it......10 read mine 'Cry not' may to marry'

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Kesav Easwaran 01 June 2009

Forget pains, Mona...but don't forget the scars...let them remain there...for next time when you are hurt there, you won't feel any pain...you smile! well, where are they now who wanted to hurt you there? Poignant piece...thanks...10

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this is your most excellently writtten poem... ever..

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