Friday, June 28, 2013

Getting Fat Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm livin' on my own now.

Thus - I gobble like a gannet
and dribble like a drunk,
the art of table manners
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Sally Plumb Plumb
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Khairul Ahsan 24 September 2013

Getting fat, because of living on your own or 'gobbling like a gannet? 'Now I'll have to start a diet that will ease my guilt as well.' Do it soon Sally, and let us have another poem on the result!

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Sally P. P. 18 April 2020

I’d love a skinny poem. I doubt it, though. Thanks for your interest.

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Joseph Anderson 30 July 2013

A great little fun poem and a great attitude about your condition. A direct, down to earth write. I can't gain a pound. tell me how.. A joy to read

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Sally P. P. 18 April 2020

Thanks for your welcome comment, Joseph.

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Valerie Dohren 21 July 2013

Hmmm, me too Sally. Need to curb my appetite, but it is so hard. Perhaps we should go on a joint diet. Love the poem, good fun.

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Sally P. P. 18 April 2020

Hi! Val. Weight is often o problem with me. Chocolate is the problem. Thanks for your interest.

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Unwritten Soul 18 July 2013

This poem walking lines with fun imagination, and at the end you unleashed your wisdom in your heart...fat maybe thicken our skin but it cant reduce our heart feeling inside! _Soul

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Sally P. P. 19 April 2020

Thank you for your very nice comment.Much appreciated.

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Ken E Hall 03 July 2013

You go for it Sally a tisket a tasket fill your little basket...very funny getting fat thnx for the smiles, may I suggest dancing in the dark! regards

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Sally P. P. 19 April 2020

I love your advice, Ken. A bit of shadow dancing might help. x

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I really enjoyed this poem very satirical in style' thnx for sharing.

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Sally P. P. 19 April 2020

Your comment is much appreciated. Thanks.

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Kevin Halls 28 June 2013

Smashing poem Sally.And there's me thinking you were a slim svelte super model!

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Sally P. P. 19 April 2020

I am sometimes.on rare occasions.Comfort eating soon messes me up. x

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Paul Brookes 28 June 2013

I know this too well I gave up smoking and living alone at the same time not good. Made laugh, but had a serious side too Great poem 10/10 BB =: OD

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Sally P. P. 19 April 2020

Thanks for your understanding, Paul, and your interest.

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