Thursday, July 28, 2005

Getting Brighter Comments

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The liar
With great desire
To have a hair
That resembles mine
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Konjit Berhane
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Joseph Daly 18 November 2005

Konjit, I like this, I think it lacks maudilinity (if that's a word) . Well set out, with a sort of strange feeling of optimism. I cant quite expand on that just yet. Fondest Denis Joe

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Uriah Hamilton 28 July 2005

Please tell me this poem is not true! the part about you having cancer! the part about seeing the bright side of life, I hope will be true of everyone.

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