Getting Back Up Comments

i love this poem, it has a very deep meaning to it. it is an absolute masterpiece. i have to research a poem for my english assignment and i think i have found my poem.

''It's a battlefield of broken goals, A purple sky with empty souls. The city streets with littered trash, the wild fire left with ash.'' very nice saying, i like it........................................................... .................................................................................................. .................................................................................................thanks.

good rhythm, good rhme, nice wording, great message.

I like this poem it is beautiful,

Hey LP, I'm a student in the Uk studying like any other school boy. I have a passion for making music in my spare time but i lack the gift to write lyrics. Then i stumbled upon this poem at the end of december 2009 and felt these words were extremely motivational. I managed to include about 30% of these wordings into the lyrics of my song which i've just finished making in late march 2010. I felt it was only fair to tell you.......if you'd like to hear the song i made please contact me on Mayo94coolkid@yahoo.com and i'll reply with an attachment as soon as possible. Stay blessed!

Hi LP, I had a look at a couple of your poems and I like what I see. This one kinda stuck with me because of the words you used in it, they created some nice imagery in my mind. I'll be back to check out more later.

Yeah, we all feel different taking our journeys. No one can help us if we don't help ourselves first. <3

ohhhhhhhhh i know this feeling.. Any can provide you with encouraging words and inspirational writes... but it s easier said than done to face the battle of life... cause when the real problem comes.. no one can really understand how we feel. you say a lot about life indeed.. with lv shan

I appreciate that very much

Best wishes to all of you too. Thanks. Reality hurts, but I love sharing poems like that. I appreciate you taking your time to read this. -Ilana.

Hi Ilana! A splendid read and so true! ! Beautifully expressed quite an eloquent write thank you! ! Best wishes, *10*! ! Friend Easy

Thank You Guys Very Very Much This poem was important to me to hear what you think, Thanks! You all left long comments (or short) but with an agreement and a touching poet to poet statement. and added your own! (great!) Thanks. -Ilana.

This is a well written poem giving the reader a chance to experience all the ups and downs of every daly living and then finally getting back up. very good write I will also try to read some of the others in the near future. Keep wirting. Lynn

LIFE IS ALWAYS FULL OF JOY AND MISERY, like the sea with high and low tides, its natural and so natural we could feel the atmosphere of life is always gettin a headstart, so that we can have an ample time to prepare our strategy to handle the outcome out of it.Great writes ILLANA! ! I 'll read more of yours soon.

so true. getting back up is the hardest part, but you have to do what you have to do.

I personally think this poem is my best work. Ha, but it's up to you. I just felt so real, so emotional when I wrote this, even if it sounds less emotional than the others. I just loved every word that I put into this poem. And I hope it moved you too, I hope more than I hope for my other poems.