Sunday, January 14, 2007

Getting Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sea, the sun, the sand and the surf,
The views, the dunes, the cliffs and the turf,
The peace, the calm, the rest and the play,
The delights and the pleasures of just getting away.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 18 April 2008

Yes it will soon be that time of year again for our annual soaking down south! . Lovely work Ernestine, great read. Andrew x

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Esther Leclerc 18 January 2007

Nothing like a wonderful vacation, Ernestine, although the planning of a much-anticipated one comes close! A fun piece with great rhythm and rhyme. Esther : ]

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Duncan Wyllie 16 January 2007

I seldom go away Ernestine, but this sounds like a wonderful reason to travel, all the preperation and excitment, YOU ARE SUCH A FINE LADY Thankyou again for yet another wonderfully written peice Love duncan X

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Tranquil Ocean 14 January 2007

Loved the structure.....its so smooth...you can just drink it! ! Love..>TO

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Jim Foulk 14 January 2007

very relaxing piece of poetry, well done Eenestine, well written.

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Geoff Warden 14 January 2007

Ernestine, what a piece of work you have here, , , , , for the time it took to read this, , I took a vacation, , , , and all was at peace, , , well done, , , an' yes where are those margaretas

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 January 2007

To 'ell with New York...i'm going on vacation with you....! This is marvelous work, my dear...Your structure is almost edible... The locution, impeccable....And, well....did ya think i expected any thing less than to be able to offer such a positive critique on a Northover Work? ~ F. j. R. ~

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 14 January 2007

Ernestine? You are tremendous! This vivid collection of words put together in the manner that has been done, is brilliant! You are an artist of amazing depth. This poem is fantastic stuff! Congrats! L

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Patricia Gale 14 January 2007

Getting away.. grand idea, along with this piece makes a perfect read.... Now where is the lil' drinks with the umbrellas...lol

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