Monday, May 13, 2013

Get Well Soon Comments

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Through breath is entered
Life and death
Soft tissues take it all in
While the necessary gases
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Rick Elpers
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Amanda Laurent 22 May 2013

I love how you portray the body in this poem with your carefully chosen words, and how you could make the process of illness and recovery so poetic!

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Poetheart Morgan 15 May 2013

Hold thigh and breath! Deeply, is so easy. Was i speak to myself and my loved ones when bronchitis come! ! !

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