Get Up, But Don’t Bother Me...... [humor; Short Enough; Marriage; Fiction! ; Modeled On Lora Colon's 'similar' Poem] Comments

I'm so glad I read your commentary Bri and that you're not that sort of person. I did laugh when I realized I was also fooled into believing it to be about an abused woman when there are so many people out there of both sexes who live in such a scary despicable reality.

By chance, if I awaken before you Don't look for me anywhere else I'll be in the kitchen near the fridge Gobbling down ice cream, before it melts!

Oh my gosh! ! ! ! It's hilarious! ! ! ! !

I've added this to my list of favorites. My favorite stanza is: If you awaken before me, Get busy; you know the drill. Two eggs over easy on dry toast, And don’t you DARE, MY coffee spill! ! 10+++

Ha Ha it is easy and good to write, but just once you try to blacken those eyes and then God only may help you guy. She will definitely get busy in her drill, but not with Two eggs over easy on dry toast Rather - Two eggs will be thrown on your face and chest ! ! ! ! ....... Ha Ha thank you and love you

Woah sure not for the wife to read! Cruel humor but anyting goes for poetry., unless u have a mean wife. Made me giggle and guffaw gah!

I am crying in my sleep I must be dreaming of you. Very beautifully presented poem with nice imagery within is drafted really. Nice one.10.