Get Up And Rise Comments
When words fail to explain
And eyes are tear drained
Get up and rise
Don't welcome the loser sighs
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Thank you so much sir, delighted to know that you liked the poem
An inspirational piece written in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
You are very kind sir, thank you so much for reading my poems and sharing your thoughtful observations on the same.
I do feel hope when reading this poem. I too have learnt that it is counter-productive to sleep in late in the mornings. That is not a solution. 'Get up and rise' is better.
Thank you for the kind words sir. Your comments have encouraged me to write more!
A powerful write imbued with wisdom. There are many lines in this poem that fuel the mind to change course whenever we are at our lowest lows. Very inspiring and well crafted write.
A brilliant start is what sets you apart. A lovely piece in the spirit of Arise, awake, and stop not till the goal is reached, a Vedic saying.
" A brilliant start is what sets you apart" Couldn't have said it better sir. Thank you for the kind words, glad to know you liked the poem
A positive poem. ps correct looser to loser. Thanks for your comments.Appreciated.
Thank you for the feedback ma'am, I had noticed the error and changed it in the poem but I can't seem to change it in the video. Thanks for understanding.
I reckon The whisper shouts now: get up and rise Defeat is a loser's paradise.. beautiful positive thought that enlivens the reader. thank u dear poetess., tony
Thank you so much Dr.Brahmin, delighted to know that you liked the poem. Just read your message, and I must thank you again for so generously rating this poem of mine. Your comments have always boasted my self confidence and motivated me to write more.
Fantastic poem. Full of positivity. A profound message appeals to the reader's heart and the way it has been conveyed enhances impact. The Poet's Notes add to its utility. Thanks, Chandini Jaswal ji.
Very impressive write, Chandini Jaswal. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
I love your inspirational poem, beautifully written and a powerful message!
A wonderful poem, full of hope and life. It certainly brightened my outlook! My day. Whoever says poetry is depressing, can hush up and change their mind after reading this joyous gem!
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7/19/2025 6:24:29 AM # 1.0.0
Good piece of art. I like it