Get-Up-And-Go Comments

Once again a beautiful flow of words from your pen. A weaker bird can be a prey to stronger ones. But when no way is left, surely the small bird will stand, for how long it can keep on flying, so a time will come when it will stand in front either to die or to live peacefully if life is saved.

Though she may be weaker but did not surrender to the mighty but applied her brain for rescue. It's a nice inspiring poem in deed.

beautiful write.................like it

great write, the imagery is excellent.

At the surface level, this is the story of small bird chased by a bigger bird.... a predator! But at a deeper level, it can be the story of any of the weak, running away for life when chased by a stronger one to be subdued and preyed upon! A great write Deepak! A 10

mind over matter, that I care for, I like it.