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Very Nice. I loved the way it unfolds.

well crafted poem.................

nice poem...im not in a sound mind to comment on your poem coz i got so many to prioritize but even if in that way...i encouraged u to write a lot...heheheh''''' as if im an expert...

Finely tuned verse with the bonus of great imagery....You have a wonderful way with expression...which I look for a=in all poets.....keep up the excellent work my friend 10

Goood write........................10s

and the make up washed away.. the sun came out to play...above.. and below the hands busy indeed.. full of need in glass that sees.. where you go..iip