Saturday, November 22, 2008

Get Over It... Comments

Rating: 4.8

I used to think that i am yours and you are mine
Nothing in this world can do us apart till the end of time

But now I realize that there is nothing between me and you
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Little Sunshine
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a tragedic end... when it s over it s over... well said! ! !

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Aijaz Asif 06 December 2008

'But honey listen to me it is over Don’t cry over spilt milk When it is over it is over just get over it too' beautiful start and strong ending...i like it....well done...10 asif

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sara }i{ 01 December 2008

Very beautiful writing, but i hope i can do that too

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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! ! a beautiful piece---but I cant get over it its toooooooooooooooo good----I am reading it over and over again A+ and 10+ my dear sweet friend Hataw lots of love and regards Anjali

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Yasser Koor 24 November 2008

oh oh oh that what u have to say when someone leave u or break ur heart. i like it soooooooooo much. i like tis sort of poems so much.it is amazing dear friend, don't cry over spilt milk, , , , i use this idiom alote, so don't cry over spilt milk and get over it. i gave u 10 +++++++++ it is deserve more than 10000000000000000000000

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Serenity Prayer 24 November 2008

that is ironicly funny. lol. its a long story, but i like this poem. great job.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 November 2008

' Come and get over it ' words flow like water but the burden of failure and agony will be shouldered by the reluctant heart.Nice piece Hataw.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 November 2008

Last stanza is beautiful, sadly written but very determined.

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Ency Bearis 23 November 2008

great write..wonderful and expressed it with good deliverance..nice theme..A10 Ency Bearis

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<font color=black>Nagourta 22 November 2008

I would be dead if my lover said that to me, good write Hataw! hope all is well...

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 November 2008

Sadly sometimes we have to say it loud and clear... Andy 10

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