Tuesday, August 5, 2008

Get Out Of My Life! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who the hell are you?
To tell me what to do
Your love is nothing new
And you’ve never been true
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Susan Jarvis 05 August 2008

Gloria Gaynor, eat your heart out! ! The sheer anger and determination to survive, in spite of past hurt, really shine through in this gutsy poem. I like the way the each end of line rhyming word continues throughout each quatrain. S ;)

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