Get Away From Me Comments

no, I no need your happiness, no need your heaven no need your Eden garden, no need you smiling sun and moon no need the peaceful flying pigeons, no need to live for good life I need you, yes, I need you very much I need your presence in my heart everytime

I wanted you, your breaths, your nerves, your hearts in me I wanted your presence not only in happiness but also in sorrow I wanted you in the scorching summer as well as flowery spring I wanted your words in my words like the holy verse of God I wanted your companionship like the rose and its aroma but now for the sake of good life you left me alone for the sake of good earning and surviving you've gone for the sake of ephemeral happiness you are in difficulties

give not me the flowers, the fragrant give not me the flying birds canvas give not me the shining of rising sun give not me the dusk of chirping birds give not me the warmth kisses on the eve light give not me the rosy beds on the moonlit night

This is the crazy wind Very Crazy than me. Is there another word left Can you understand? .....oh all madness in the love, all craziness of life in that love; love needs mutual understating, love need equal ownership of happiness and sorrow otherwise it will get away too far.....beautifully expressed on the love; congrats for being selected this beautiful poem as POD.....deserves 10++

'Worldly things are silent They talk' - Sometimes, silence is louder than speech. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

This is a very interesting piece of writing filled with allusions. Plenty of food for thought. Thanks for sharing this piece of writing.

I may be just an ignorant cowboy, but to me this poem makes no sense. Sorry.

Adict! ! Stress! Facing the facts of life around. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I feel the same he doesn’t understand

Good one. Drunk with love and ethanol.

CONGRATULATIOINS, dear poet Cencay! I have been several times to your beauteous contry, truly like in paradise on earth Indeed so man y wines and tomatoes but your cute poem is so very enjoyable to read. I feel all the emotions you uttered here. Amazing attractive appearance! A 10 ful Score. Please write more! God Bless YOU!

An excellently penned poem of the day Truly exceptional piece. Congrats on your featured work....10+++