George The Dragon Comments

This poem is amazing, I feel so zen now that I have read it. I can really understand what you're going through, I too have emotional problems regarding my height. One word......................................................................................amazing. (Wow, I love ellipsis.)

Well, it's a really cute poem for a children's book! Write another, see how it goes ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! -G.H

Nice little storyline, and good flow. I think though that you may mean 'I wish', said George, 'that I was small' not 'tall'. Just an observation. Love Ernestine XXX