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Tenderly written and your experience madeyou realise how fragile life is, well composed 10 Lynda xx

Awesome flow....greatly enjoyed.....

Excellent.......deep and meaningful..........liked it.........

Poeetic master piece good write 10ssss

So deep, sometimes we need something to remind us with the mercy of God, nicely written with strong phrases & structure, good job

Inspirations and blessings instill dreams in us and hopes transcend.A golden mirage looms, to reach the same we have to surmount the barriers of cliffs and chasm.But mirage will no longer be a mirage once the barriers are overcome.And Subhendu, you will surmount any barriers in the way of your poetics to grip the golden shadow or golden mirage.Fantastic as always.

Great poem living another day can always make u feel better

Dr, this is so nice poem i love the rythm luwi

Loved the lines... heart sneaks slowly into whispers of hope sun turns dawn pounding darkness to dulcet and to smear dream over the soul to smooch Wow Sir... Great write... Masterful and surely enlightening...

beautiful poem.good composition and nice meanings conveyed.last para is really fine yet it is golden whispers let me awake to smear dream over the soul to smooch and i keep golden shadow stifling beneath let your blessing by hope of tomorrow transcends within ' voted10 surya

Thank you for sharing your beautiful art. Superb write. Poemhunter is fortunate to have you.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra

Succumb to prayer enwraps the heart inturn wraps your into this lovely poem deep words ++++++++10 regards

After trauma of any kind 'heart sneaks slowly into hope' and you have outlined hope here and underscored it as being the way of transcendence - - excellent verse....10 from Fay

Wow is the first word that comes to mind when i first read this. it is truely an elegantly written heartfelt piece with both theological tones and pesonal hidden deeep inside your words. it is wonderful! Jen

but for the grace of God.....a beautiful piece....nicely done

a nice expression of saying thanks...this poem is highly appreciated..

A very good write. I enjoyed reading genuflection and have to give you a 10. Your friend Lynn

This is some powerful work and having carefully read your biography and some of your work, I can now understand what inspired this and call upon the golden whisperer to guard you so you keep showering us with this intelligent and delicate and fine art.

wow great symbolism very thought invoking nice write Adam

yet it is golden whispers let me awake to smear dream over the soul to smooch and i keep golden shadow stifling beneath let your blessing by hope of tomorrow transcends within great imaginations.. well written and the idea which seems to be a sweet fantsy is really tackled professionally.. love the way you write poems and here in this poem you proved that you are are more then a poet and things come up from the core of your sweet and kind heart.. well done dear poet friend for such a good poem..wish you never stop writing..10/10