Genuflected Comments

you have indeed written this one in the most artistic abstract way imaginable..giving it a rythmn all its own....very enjoyable while humbling at the same time..

Thank you very much for sharing this poem with us. Great observations. Kudos.

inventive doesn't seem to do it justice. you bring the language alive as if you made it up yourself. and as always you use your gift to bring us a glimpse of the spiritual essence in all things. Thank you, Ashraful, for not just reflecting but creating beauty itself.

Thank you for birthing this poem to the world. Eternal thanks, kind sir.

A rickshaw and a motorcycle on a moonlit night. What a captivating imagist you are.Your power to create will overcome all obstacles of human invention.10/10 Warm regards, Sandra

Sad truth but, our inventions do enslave us. The humour when you say the rickshaw laughed As it crossed you shows the satirist in you. Profound thoughts potrayed through simple verse! I geneflect before your thoughts! Angel

Amazing thought process.You surprise me always with your novel thoughts....Here you show again that you can tell a lot without using much words....Excellent title....10+++ - Brishti

a sweet n simple piece on genuflection.. the 3rd stanza seemed funny to me :)

a story star and end with few lines stouchingly said...10++++

Genuflection mechanized....messaging in simple words

We are all in praise of the modern technology invented for they make our life easier and happier...though at times takes into negativity as the abuse sprout in....10+++

a very powerful and deep write Sarkar..... you use 2 of the most poluted machines ever invented in this master piece of yours very beautifully, i might got it wrong but still it is amazing piece....thanks for you precious comments on my work.....many 10'sssss and A'ssssss ' A men invented menace for itself to destruct the beauty of nature and peace' - asif rgds asif

i love the way you write. a good focus. shan

immediately closer ones they are...we are at oue knees to them..since we use them...robots would become more than man...dangerously mor...a nice thought

The Divine defies us to see it in small things... some have lost this ability. Excellent! 10! Thanks for your comments on ' unconquerable'.

Yes, it is true, we are running up until we are tired in this society that will never be Plato's republic and we seek creative purposes to save us from what we could become in the absence of God.10+++

reflective and ponderable lines written with deep concentration well done cheers

enjoyed very much great title 10