Wednesday, June 25, 2014

Gently In The Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gently in the morning
touch me if you will
tell me that you love me
when the day is still
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Valerie Dohren
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In tender touching tones. Well done my friend!

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In tender touching tones. Well done my friend!

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Dave Walker 08 July 2014

Sometime the quiet of the night comforts us. A wonderful poem.

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Sandra Feldman 07 July 2014

what can I say that hasn't already been said, ? I think I'll send you a top of the morning instead

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Hazel Durham 06 July 2014

A beautiful, subtle write about the harsh realities of life that at times we find hard to face, the shade comforts us from the glare of daily life! ! Outstanding write! !

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Chuy Amante 06 July 2014

A lovely write 'bout morning light May you have your loving squeeze all day long and into the night!

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John Brown 04 July 2014

It gave me goosebumps. Beautiful Val.

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Hans Vr 04 July 2014

Another masterpiece, Valerie. So smooth, so sweet and so moving. It changes really the composition of the reader, it mellows the heart, it touches our mind. This is excellent poetry.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Heartfelt poem from your pen. Your poem is cool and soothing to read. Loved it.

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Dinesan Madathil 29 June 2014

Sure it is your dreams will listen to you Val. Every morning has to be very fresh to us. May it be as fresh as the drop of a dew on a leaf for you Val. A good write on dreams.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 June 2014

Brightness opens eyes to the world. We need the shade. Beautifully expressed.

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Amitava Sur 27 June 2014

A lovely poem Valerie, whatever may be the situation I wish that you always feel nearer to him and always feel being loved.

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Mary Forrester 27 June 2014

Straight from the heart Valerie and a beautiful poem.

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Lyn Paul 27 June 2014

Oh how your words are straight from your heart. Beautifully written. Yet we must never be afraid for we can't change anything. X

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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2014

beautifully written Val. But the morning always comes. I enjoyed the read

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Colleen Courtney 25 June 2014

Love this gorgeous poem! It's so full of love and trust for your significant other. I'm interpreting it as you feel safe all during the night because they are there by your side to hold you and protect you but yet when the sun comes shining in and the day begins you have to leave one another to do the things we must do to survive in this world and that leaves you vulnerable until the night returns again. Then again I could be wrong...... It doesn't even matter! This is just such a great write!

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