Gently in the morning
touch me if you will
tell me that you love me
when the day is still
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In tender touching tones. Well done my friend!
what can I say that hasn't already been said, ? I think I'll send you a top of the morning instead
A beautiful, subtle write about the harsh realities of life that at times we find hard to face, the shade comforts us from the glare of daily life! ! Outstanding write! !
A lovely write 'bout morning light May you have your loving squeeze all day long and into the night!
Another masterpiece, Valerie. So smooth, so sweet and so moving. It changes really the composition of the reader, it mellows the heart, it touches our mind. This is excellent poetry.
Heartfelt poem from your pen. Your poem is cool and soothing to read. Loved it.
Sure it is your dreams will listen to you Val. Every morning has to be very fresh to us. May it be as fresh as the drop of a dew on a leaf for you Val. A good write on dreams.
Brightness opens eyes to the world. We need the shade. Beautifully expressed.
A lovely poem Valerie, whatever may be the situation I wish that you always feel nearer to him and always feel being loved.
Oh how your words are straight from your heart. Beautifully written. Yet we must never be afraid for we can't change anything. X
beautifully written Val. But the morning always comes. I enjoyed the read
Love this gorgeous poem! It's so full of love and trust for your significant other. I'm interpreting it as you feel safe all during the night because they are there by your side to hold you and protect you but yet when the sun comes shining in and the day begins you have to leave one another to do the things we must do to survive in this world and that leaves you vulnerable until the night returns again. Then again I could be wrong...... It doesn't even matter! This is just such a great write!
In tender touching tones. Well done my friend!