Saturday, February 27, 2016

Gently Crying 1940 Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wake up in a panic,
but it is still darkness
my blind eyes see,
having dreamed I saw
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Terry Collett
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Brian Mayo 14 March 2016

Excellent writing style. Your poem wastes no time dropping the reader right into a trauma unit, but then relaxes just enough to let the details drip like an IV bag. Powerful compelling story- -your sentences remind me a little of Ken Follett, - -hey===Follett, Collett.... hmmmmm. wild. Anyway, I admire your writing style and would like to know what inspired this terrific poem.

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Marianne Reninger 27 February 2016

Grace, overwhelming grief.....

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