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Gentlemen Caller Comments

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Lonely nights crying myself to sleep,
A aching heart yearning for something more,
I hope that God will give me a sign,
If only the stars would align,
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Lauren Coles
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Bri Edwards 28 January 2023

And I think you 'want' Gentleman, not Gentlemen, in your title. ;)

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Bri Edwards 28 January 2023

line 2: use 'an', not 'a', aching heart I hope you get the 'something more' you yearn for. bri : )

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