Saturday, November 7, 2015

Gentlemen Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is something sexy
About a gentleman.
The way he treats you with respect.
The way he doesn't expect you
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Glen Kappy 01 September 2018

like many of your poems, suzanne, this one feels like it flowed right out. its repetitions are necessary, feel right, as you fill in your sketch, give it more dimension. if there were such a thing as a finishing school for men, this might be necessary reading. -glen

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Chuy Amante 21 January 2016

indeed like the perfect chord, a harmonizing that is rare

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 07 November 2015

Truly romantic, also inspiring. Reminds of what it's like to feel famine. Mmmmm..... Nice work. X

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Suzanne Hayasaki 07 November 2015

I am happy you liked it :)

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Suzanne Hayasaki 07 November 2015

I'm glad you liked it :)

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Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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