Gentle Venus Comments

favorite lines so far: On a hillside below the path With sunlight for my bath and: Worries of the day my mind does lack..............sounds lovely! - - - - - - - - - -your Poet's Notes reminds me of a snake, sunning itself. At my feet lays green valley wide.........lies (and i don't mean untruths!) to avoid not/knot you could make a bit if a change..............., but NOT NOW. My heart now seems a great black knot. to.............My heart now seems full of rot. Sparkling uncountable in nights richness..............maybe night's? to be told i don't love you can prevent future pain, though at first it may cause you great mental strain. how's the family life, my good PH friend? ? bri :) any progress writing your books?