Wednesday, August 30, 2017

Gentle Trees Comments

Rating: 5.0

What more pretty can there be
Than rainfall
On gentle trees
On a monless
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Dawn Novus
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Thomas Plotz 26 September 2018

Oh how we love recycled Tears - Precipitation; as the rain falls from the painters plight. I love the poem, thank you. Tommy.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 April 2018

What more pretty can there be Than rainfall On gentle trees A powerful opening of a lovely poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2018

It's a wonderful piece of poetry! It gives me immense pleasure reading this beautiful poem time and again! Excellent style of penning! Keep it up!

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Bharati Nayak 12 January 2018

A swirling leaf Rides on the breeze Drops of life Recycled tears Shed in joy And sobbed in fears Falls upon a thousand leaves- - - - -Rain is that poetic inspiration which overwhelm us in awe and wonder.An amazing write, thanks for sharing.

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Dawn Novus 13 January 2018

Thank you for such a generous comment Bharati (I love the meaning of your name) . Indeed rain is so so sacred, in ways we cannot imagine.

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Glen Kappy 04 January 2018

If I get you on this one, Loza, it reminds me of two of my poems—Winter Tree at Sunset and When Rain Means Tears. -Glen

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2017

A fascinating poem carrying elegant expression! Enjoyed reading the fabulous piece! ! Go on singing this way amusing the whole poetic world dear friend..stay always blessed! !

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Dawn Novus 01 December 2017

Thankyou Dr Swain..what a lovely comment! You were my first favourite poet added to my list so this means so much. Thankyou.

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Marin Asteropeitria 25 November 2017

Majestic...really I love it. I could feel the poem in my soul! ! ! ! On gentle trees such a simple but beautiful verse. I think i can relate to the four last verses! ! ! I love this poem! ! !

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Dawn Novus 25 November 2017

That you feel it in your soul is such an honour for me. Thankyou so much for your lovely comment Marina.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 October 2017

When rain falls! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 24 September 2017

You did a very good job with this. Lovely poem!

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Dawn Novus 25 September 2017

Thankyou Practicing Poetes. I wrote this poem 17 years ago one lovely night and I love that is is got its place finally.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 September 2017

Wonderful imaginary. It is a beautiful poem having stunning expression and nice collocation. Thank you dear Midnight, keep the ball rolling.

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Nudershada Cabanes 04 September 2017

Beautiful poem with very good imagery.

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