Gentle Spirit Comments

your presence is a lovely breeze it's gravity I can't define I love this quote. beautiful

I can’t breathe Unless you soothe me With your angelic smiles is the beauty and joyous reward of loving greatly and deeply. God give me all earthly grief I stand and suffer silently But never isolate me from This gentle, naughty, silvern spirit! is a prayer of true love prepared to suffer greatly, yet endue silently, if only the lover is never parted from the 'gentle, naughty' beloved prized above all else. A beautiful poem read with a smile in the heart and in the eyes.

U r mesmerizing...lovely

Never isolate me from this gentle, naughty, silvern spirit_____Awesome! ! ! ! ! Well written verses Rekha! !

when expect more we getting self disapoint too. This what ur poem says. In one side we demands to be loved by our offsprings with sooth, care, smile etc and in other side we admitting ourselves that life is not a fresh flower like instead it is dry. A dryness will not yeild anything support to liveliness. I cannot understand why these two matter collaborated here. May be you livve alone or lonliness covers you.

Bombarding expression for the soul to explore the words here..It warming all the surface and while smile reading this...beautiful write_Unwritten Soul

A lovely poem of two halves and what a contrast between the two.Light and shade defines a painting.You have painted love.10.

“Great, volition of thought riding in the spirit of harmony”.... I like it...thank you my sister and God bless...10+++

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing.....

Extensive use of vocabulary to describe how love can change our perception to life. The first half shows the positive side of love and the second is filled with despair. When in love and things are going well, we tend to see life as good (beautiful) and when not, we see life as not being good. Yet I've discovered that, 'Life is neither good nor bad, life is life'... we decide accordingly. Very well written. Enjoyed it much.

I like the use of language in the first section. Big bold and complex then the poem changes and the language gets more simple but still effective.

keep the spirit high, good poem