Thursday, April 9, 2009

Gentle Rain: Simple Pleasures Comments

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The gentle rain is falling
It washes out my soul
As I stand beneath it
It makes my body whole.
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Mahfooz Ali
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Anjali Sinha 09 April 2009

oh how lovely those simple pleasures of life and then that gentle rain ---washes away all your blues. This reminds me of Madonnas lovely song 'Rain'. -10 anjali

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hmmmm... enjoyable... +10. (had to rate this one)

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Catrina Heart 09 April 2009

Great flow of words, so gentle like the rain............

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Ency Bearis 09 April 2009

nice flow, nice to read..well penned..great poem...10

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