From within the rain
there's like a song
creatively
rhyming
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You really like rain sir. The way it calms your soul. This one reminded me that every thing that God created is wonderful. It just depends on how we all look on things. Thank you sir.
For someone who is not a professional writer you are prolific, and these are enjoyable. I like the way you chose your subjects from nature. Please read mine – Rain - also - We the Unencumbered – Adeline
wow! Mr Bearis! a short, simple and yet lyrical that can lulled me into sleep. Such a good piece, i feel like hearing the rain whispering peace with each lines. I love the way you interpret the rain. I love rain!
I Love this poem, it really cool and cold like gentle rain...I give you 10 coz i like this so much, amusing tones! _Unwritten Soul
THERE ARE SO MANY WAYS THAT YOU DESCRIBED THE GENTLENESS OF THE RAIN WHICH WE OVERLOOK SOMETIMES NICE POEM NICE RAIN
This is absolutely beautiful. One of the best I have red on this site.
great lyrical verses melodiously well presented about the rain, nice, nice, nice