Friday, April 16, 2010

Gentle Lips (Follow Up To Shall I Beg?) Comments

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You've stood in the rain long enough, it's time to come inside.
I understand why your crying, but your trying to hide them I this rain.
You've cried for so long the reddness has been washed away.
Please understand that I still hate you.
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Adrian Cordova
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Leila Taghavi 19 April 2010

Harsh kiss! ! ! ! Very evocative

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Adrian Cordova 17 April 2010

We've all stood in the rain to hide more then a few tears I think.

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Adalie Hettie 17 April 2010

STANDING-IN-THE-RAIN-CRYING.....boy does that sound familiar. I do like this poem.You stayed on track with your thoughts. Adalie

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