Wednesday, June 29, 2005

Gentle Gravity Comments

Rating: 4.8

Silent at first;
A duet danced and sung by eager eyes
Across a distance ineffectually imposed
By dining-table dimensions,
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Tony Jolley
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Chuck Audette 29 June 2005

Loved the language and imagery. The first four stanzas are full of multi-disciplinary science references, which makes me wonder if you are a professor or teacher. Hmm.. Your biography is a bit less than revealing. Anyway, great poem! - chuck

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