Monday, December 21, 2009

Gentle Chorus Comments

Rating: 2.8

The air is wintry
The morning sky is silver
And still the birds sing
I cease all of my actions
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Nate Flying Owl
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the second line for me is the most eye-catching line! excellent write sir!

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A laudable lesson for living: do not ever allowing your singing to be seasonal. Well done my friend

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Brenda Arroyo 11 March 2010

It's beautiful, isn't it? To experiance the freshness of nture and just being alive to enjoy. I love this feeling. And you wrote it perfect. simple.

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