Sunday, January 26, 2025

Gentle Breezes- Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds have parted now.
Pray, the sun may shine somehow.
And the mountains bow.
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Rebecca Navarre
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Rob Lamberton 11 March 2025

The prayer of faith moves mountains!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 February 2025

Prayers give us strength to conquer darkness in life. A meaningful succinct write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 February 2025

A well crafted haiku that gives hope. Superb imagery!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 27 January 2025

Rhyme isn't a part of haiku but you have made it look more beautiful and bright. Congrats

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 January 2025

This is an important work Rebecca Bravo! ! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 27 January 2025

This is excellent short work..... thank u....

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