Monday, November 28, 2005

Gemma's Bar Comments

Rating: 3.9

Around the corner by the place we called
Silverlake, and down from the Cold Cut joint
where sausages hung in the window, Gemma's
swinging door was a Saturday pleasure.
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Louise Marie DelSanto
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Cj Heck 17 December 2005

I'm astounded by the low rating on this poem. It's a wonderful poem and a joy to read. Your words are woven through each line to create a story that held me from the first line to the last. Well done, Louise. Warmest regards and respect, CJ

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