Saturday, October 29, 2005

Gemini Bliss Comments

Rating: 5.0

He sucks out my brain when he speaks
And I'd like to cup his in a glass
Watch it monkey dance like mine
My fellow gemini
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Natasha Ashwe
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Original Unknown Girl 06 September 2007

God I love this, it's so brilliant and witty, so typically Gemini! I have Gemini rising and I understand the restlessness and nervous energy you describe here so eloquently! This is a fun poem too.... HG: -) xx

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Geoff Warden 28 July 2007

Gemini Bliss.....Sounds like stollen kiss from a well observed moment..... Loved the discriptive narations of this piece, and well placed slapstick humour' this was a very enjoyable read.....

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Michael Philips 29 October 2005

This poem is a very fun roller coaster of a narrative.

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Max Reif 29 October 2005

I found a lot of good description, vivid language, ironic humor, and keen observation and reflection here!

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Natasha Ashwe

Natasha Ashwe

Kingston, Ontario.
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