Sunday, June 12, 2016

Gem Of The East Comments

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Camels and oxen, silhouettes
Ripples in golden sands
Whispers of abundant harvests
In a prosperous land.
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Della Perry
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Bri Edwards 26 January 2017

hi Della, i put the poem in as you wrote it, then returned and added r to shines. THEN i noticed cantalope was underlined in RED! i Googled and found: Cantaloupe From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia Rockmelon redirects here. For the band, see Rockmelons. For other uses, see Cantaloupe (disambiguation) . Cantaloupe Cantaloupe (also cantelope, cantaloup, muskmelon (India and the United States) , mushmelon, rockmelon, sweet melon, Persian melon, or spanspek (South Africa)) refers to a variety of the Cucumis melo species in the Cucurbitaceae family. hee-hee! who knew? bri :)

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Bri Edwards 26 January 2017

i think you mean Samarkand SHRINES. right? :) i plan to change it when i put your poem into February 2017's Section A showcase. are you SURE they have NO vices? not even used by................oops! i was thinking of vises. :) but, STILL, are you SURE! ? bri :)

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