Gem Comments

" Such transparency alone exalts society to spiritual integrity and man above human weal and woe" Really amazing write! ..10

You hit the right notes As Usual Mr. BOGUS. LOVELY

Rare Gem as to the first born babe's ice clean smile Loved the beauty of rendering the essense of life!

Thought is the soul of a poem but in my humble opinion a blank verse is not poetry rather it's prose.

Very nice poem, with such a big nucleus of wisdom inside it. In and out, the same, fully transparent, what a gem! Excellent.

We all aspire to that gem of rarity that transcends the boundaries of the reason and revels in a spiritual growth and dimension that raise the soul to the highest levels of beauty! A beautiful rendition!

A universal write that sheds light on what is truly precious.

Nice piece. Thanks for sharing

I liked some poetic expressions beauty akin to a pomegranate bud, ... first born babe's ice-clean smile...

An intelligent write The purity of the ice smile the blue diamonds shines and man is an insincere beast ah but truth is no one knows great poem enjoyed

A sublime thought provoking poem that we need to read carefully to comprehend its connotations. I like how you craft saying pomegranate bud, very poetic. Kudos. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

The structure really points the reader to question their understanding of how the different ideas play together. Very inciteful in one of the last lines how you point out the futility of reasoning in isolation from morality.

A gem of a poem. be what you seem' like the first born babe's ice-clean smile.....love the lines.

I like the way you put some rhyme words in your blank verse in your poem

The idea is a gem itself, i love how you describe it...the truth has many way to see... And you show it this way

Can't resist: A gem of a poem!

Very uplifting poem!

A man or a woman with impeccable nature and purity of heart like the 'first born babe's ice-clean smile.... alike in and out in sincerity' should be a gem as 'Such transparency.... alone exalts society to spiritual integrity. Great poem which underlines human nature on both ends of a scale. Thanks.

The poem with different writing, nice one.

Very beautiful and special poem. A good message. " Sad, dark hearted man of reason seldom fairly understands it and more rarely abides by it though it's finer than a universe in kind! " - wonderful lines. I really loved reading it.