Monday, May 9, 2005

Geezer And The Roach (Children) Comments

Rating: 2.7

A roach came from his hiding place
and went straight to the freezer
he opened it, stuck in his face
when suddenly the geezer
...
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Tears In Rain 04 September 2005

I've said it before also. I really enjoy your lighter works. This one is begging to be illustrated, perhaps in a collection of similar works. Just and idea.

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Mary Nagy 10 May 2005

Very sweet. Quite a contrast from some of your other works. This is a great direction you've taken. Nice poem. Sincerely, Mary

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