Monday, March 19, 2012
Gee! In The Woods, Bulbuls And Orioles Fly (Limerick-14) Comments
Rating: ★4.7
Cluster of stars are blinking in the sky,
I can see blue, red and gold if I lie;
Myriad of heavenly sent lotus
Haloes in creek, Just focus
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Adeline Foster
21 March 2012
This makes a lovely poem. But, sorry, it is not a Limerick. The number of syllables in each line are too many. The syllables must be 9,9,5,5,9. This structure is non- negotiable for a limerick. It is, however, a good poem. Adeline
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7/26/2025 3:19:55 AM # 1.0.0
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