Tuesday, November 20, 2018

Gear You Lot Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lot of thoughts come into mind,
You plan and activate yourself,
Every thought becomes action,
You keep righteous vision,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Michael Walker 01 February 2019

Low gears, in life, are only a step towards top gear. Enlightening.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 November 2018

indeed- Gear you up a lot towards God, You can feel life and certainty, You can realize your identity, /// believe it

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Mj Lemon 23 November 2018

I agree with some other observations. This poem really invites a sense of calm and peace. A masterwork, Kumarmani.

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Unwritten Soul 23 November 2018

Beautiful, calm and peace....it really a nice work dear, your type of poem is like this....calmness.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 November 2018

In our emotion! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 November 2018

We have to be selective regarding which thoughts we want to become actions. This poem has spirit and wisdom; motivation and inspiration. A wonderful write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 November 2018

A wonderful spiritual write full of wisdom. Very inspiring. Liked the penultimate stanza. Brilliantly penned.10]

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Akhtar Jawad 20 November 2018

Proceed ahead with love and joy, Then see, you will get success...A wonderful advice by Mr. Mahakul who is always full of divine nectar, scented and colorful.

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Michael Walker 20 November 2018

The extended metaphor of changing gears is most effective. You need to get into top gear to succeed in the world and contemplate God. The low gears are no good. Brilliant.

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M Asim Nehal 20 November 2018

Ultimate destination of every soul.....Almighty...A thoughtful poem.

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yoonoos peerbocus 20 November 2018

God.........in every learning/well thought thought

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Kim Barney 20 November 2018

A great, inspirational poem. Your faith in God is showing. The title, however, does not really give a clue as to what the poem is going to be about. Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading this very much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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