Lot of thoughts come into mind,
You plan and activate yourself,
Every thought becomes action,
You keep righteous vision,
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indeed- Gear you up a lot towards God, You can feel life and certainty, You can realize your identity, /// believe it
I agree with some other observations. This poem really invites a sense of calm and peace. A masterwork, Kumarmani.
Beautiful, calm and peace....it really a nice work dear, your type of poem is like this....calmness.
In our emotion! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
We have to be selective regarding which thoughts we want to become actions. This poem has spirit and wisdom; motivation and inspiration. A wonderful write.
A wonderful spiritual write full of wisdom. Very inspiring. Liked the penultimate stanza. Brilliantly penned.10]
Proceed ahead with love and joy, Then see, you will get success...A wonderful advice by Mr. Mahakul who is always full of divine nectar, scented and colorful.
The extended metaphor of changing gears is most effective. You need to get into top gear to succeed in the world and contemplate God. The low gears are no good. Brilliant.
Ultimate destination of every soul.....Almighty...A thoughtful poem.
A great, inspirational poem. Your faith in God is showing. The title, however, does not really give a clue as to what the poem is going to be about. Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading this very much.
Low gears, in life, are only a step towards top gear. Enlightening.