Wednesday, June 30, 2010

Gazing Up, I See You Comments

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Every yes precedes a strike of the tongue
Every sigh of relief, a held back tear
I'm a prisoner being teased with a retractible leash
No control
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Jennifer K
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Cain XXX 03 July 2010

'I can only hope that by the end of this, you will still love me.' tt's every human's wish isn't it? to be loved as we are. it's a very good poem. the emotions portrayed are drawn out very well and the anguish the persona of this poem seems very real and honest to the reader. i think it's a poem many will be identify with. keep writing! :)

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