Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Gazing Through Airplane's Pane Comments

Rating: 5.0

High above:
The sheep-cloud being pushed by wind
her cotton tail wandering across the sky.
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 16 April 2010

Arial view panorama Bonanza of noetic diorama Imbued in biblio sound Mute as dumbfound. Very well addressed poem …fantastic …thanks Ma’am Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2009

A poet’s images and perception Can bring such delight! I gazed…and gazed…what a view… Then the plane pushes through the Cumulus to meet the runway......seen from very far and realising the good objects from the distance.. yes it is vivid description before we reach to our destiny.....10 read mine why do we neglct nature...global warming...mother

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Sensitive and full of surprises. Keep writing!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 July 2009

Everyone from an airoplane sees the earth only few like you Madam can condense that beauty into a poem. Lovely imagery, Lively expressions.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 July 2009

Good imagination while gazing from airplane's pane. So you were on a holiday trip perhaps! Regards Naseer

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Obinna Eruchie 24 July 2009

Imaginative lines, especially this one'A poet’s images and perception/ Can bring such delight, which is true.

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