Saturday, October 28, 2017

Gazing Into The Well Comments

Rating: 5.0

To write poetry,
is to retreat: —
back into my loneliness;
and abruptly, —plunge—
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2017

Beautiful poem on memories and poetry having haunting expression and nice collocation. The following lines are most touching... as a nocturnal creature, dwelling in mystery, —trying— trying to breathe under the water, crawling upon the slippery tube— the vertical tunnel... with a tiny, intermittent light, acerbically beckoning to hope: I am that ever-present presence, gazing into its own profoundness, searching for you— searching for your memory... Thank u dear Mihaela for posting such a gem.

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James Mclain 28 October 2017

Excellent take on poetry.. iip.. James

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 October 2017

Back into my loneliness! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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