Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Gaze Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stare at you with such seriousness and constancy
I see the way you adjust in your seat
Uncomfortable under the constant gaze of my eyes,
I didn’t take notice of the
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Nika Mcguin 18 February 2014

Can not express how much I love this poem, It's so refreshing~ My favorite lines are: I didn’t take notice of the Apparent Disgust on your face or how insecure you feel under my stare Because even as I watch you I was not watching you And even as I look I didn't see you And even as I thought I wasn't thinking of you But of something else, far and abstract

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