Gaza..Go A Head.. Comments

this lines are written as nformation..it can be a letter or it cud be a poem, ..ths s a beautiful piece by you..tho gaza now s sacricing some events but after thez restless nghts, it will rise..after its fall it will stand tall...heroes r ready to defend but win or lose they fight by killing bullets or by pen..ths s a very good poem written wth strong emotion..written wth brave heart..i like ths wrk of urs..honesty by concerned s imposed here..take note, , , after the storm, sun is still shining...be it...it is a part of development.. just be cool, , , ''leave it to generals'', , , generals have meanings, hpe u know whats inside generals..

They will rise and conquer, they wiil stay happy, indomitable

im kinda iffy about this one...i think if you wrote it like a book or paper, it would work. but it's not really sounding like a poem. the sentences dont fit and you use a lot of words more than once, and you shouldn't do that. and, just so you know, it's spelled, go ahead. not go a head. sorry, but that kinda bugged me. and im not trying to be mean, im trying to make you a better writer :) ~Helena