Gaza Comments

Gaza still burns our hearts… great poem

A touching poem on Gaza, a lovely short but effective poem.

brief but comprehensive, bravo

beautiful choice of words.. it flashes the love against all odds and eveil

what i like most about ur poems is the choice of words, , U cab exrpress many things, show deeep feelings or concern about something within just few lines, , , , , Well done

well talk about dark....i love it ♥ trevor adams♥

a twin couplet, brilliance in composition...you have said it in a so heartfelt opus with a brevity of structure.10

whatta wonderful lines....it consits of few wrds but conquers the whole human race....so beautiful to read, , not confusing...undersatndable, , , I LIKE THS... NAIZZ

Problem is, we don't learn anything from history...

This is really amazing! !

reflexion of a moment in time, great thoughful job.

The nightmare is beautifully expressed, Deb

powerful words indeed. wonderfully done

whoa, amazing how something so amzing can be translated into such little words.... wonderful.

This new poem is very good. There's always hope for everything. Although, it's good to be realistic when something's already done. There's a time to go around and get ahead with what you got too.

For them it is Fireworks For us It is A flow Of river In blood And blasts For them It is A news For us Any Shelter? .................................

Man heart has become a bleeding river Through broken hopes that can't deliver Our times are now only salty tears Plunged promises that no one adheres

Thank you very much...it is an expressive poem. I hope it will become more than twenty lines, but few expressive words are better than a hail of meaningless ones.

lovely write, , , very nice...we are afraid even to help...true

thats nice and kool. very nice