Gaza. Comments

She saw a figure wend it's way .........its; hope you don't mind. Lora says this cannot be read without tears welling. well, i am not insensitive, but there are no tears. if i were the dad i'm pretty sure there would be. yes, unjust in a sense, but who determines what is justice? ok, i should slap my face for writing that! i did not mean..... all people, indeed all creatures should live peaceably in a utopia if i had my way, but.........well, i don't get my way. the poem is very well written (but you knew THAT!) . I LOVE the rhyming.. bri :) to MyPoemList

A well-written poem that cannot be read without tears welling. The sadness is truly felt by the reader.

Very very sensitivelly penned ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Terribly sad poem of the insanity of war. How devastating the consequences are.