Freedom fight is over,
Found safe place as cover,
Dark clouds still hover,
So much bed blood spill over,
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Existed centuries before...n' without reprisal. Seems society has reverted backwards beyond the dark ages when someone thinks they have a right, religious or political, to dictate who you shall love and live your life with.... amazing. I like the edgy..ness about this poem, it's out there as a maverick esp in topic. Salutations to you Hasmukh
Freedom fight is over, Found safe place as cover, Dark clouds still hover,
A meaninful poem! The Govt of India has wasted time on unimportant issues, when more pressing problems are staring on our face & wating to be solved! 10! (My E-Mail box is not working properly. Kindly send all our messages through - 'poemhunter message box'! My latest poems are on page 2!) -Raj Nandy
Basic rights enshrined in constitution, Existed this before as institution, May not find favour with society, Love can be worshipped as deity
Act of two willing adults, Termed as new thing and cults, ..........10
Basic rights enshrined in constitution, Existed this before as institution, May not find favour with society, ......10
Act of two willing adults, Termed as new thing and cults, .................10
so nice to know the fight is over, after all, who has rights to discriminate?