Time started in a deserted cart
To the vacant shores that eternal
Before the start of life on earth
To the strips of emptiness
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Time of finite and infinite duration so well presented in a very well composed poem.....amazing indeed....kudos
Justice privileged on its run Truth hidden but thrust itself Sinner perishes in long run Dictator of all in an eternal cart! A poem of deep thoughts.
time started in a deserted cart To the vacant shores that eternal Before the start of life on earth To the strips of emptiness..............................great way to present the most powerful thing in this world; time................................nice job.thanks
Presentation of time is unique in your write. Enjoyed reading.
Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.
Gauge of Time... by SALINI NAIR a nice presentation from deserted cart to eternal cart..thanks