Thursday, November 13, 2014

Gauge Of Time... Comments

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Time started in a deserted cart
To the vacant shores that eternal
Before the start of life on earth
To the strips of emptiness
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SALINI NAIR
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 November 2014

Gauge of Time... by SALINI NAIR a nice presentation from deserted cart to eternal cart..thanks

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 November 2014

Time of finite and infinite duration so well presented in a very well composed poem.....amazing indeed....kudos

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Akhtar Jawad 14 November 2014

Justice privileged on its run Truth hidden but thrust itself Sinner perishes in long run Dictator of all in an eternal cart! A poem of deep thoughts.

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Saheb Mohapatra 13 November 2014

time started in a deserted cart To the vacant shores that eternal Before the start of life on earth To the strips of emptiness..............................great way to present the most powerful thing in this world; time................................nice job.thanks

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Ramesh Rai 13 November 2014

Presentation of time is unique in your write. Enjoyed reading.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 November 2014

Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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